wonderland

That was pretty gutsy, posting one of your private journal entries up here. I feel like, the way you right, really had me feeling what you where reading. I really ...

Interesting beginning you got there. It definitely makes me want to read more. Your writing style is simple, and to the point, which I like. I even enjoyed your beginning, ...

Not horrible, no But needs work, yes. Don't worry, i know what its like with writers block You have so much going on, with little emotion. There were so much ...

Good news! I now have a club out! Join! Join! Join! Max was right. The news of her fathers murder was already on the news, blaring from a radio as ...

Hey! YOu really are a fantastic writer. The only one nitpick I have is this paragraph "This, my dear sister, is my room." He landed on the mahogany bed with ...

That was a very gentle poem. I really found it lovely and romantic. what does the word 'zephyr' mean? That was my only problem I love the image that the ...

Hey! I'm WickedWonder Whats your ~Favorite animal ~Favorite thing to do ~Favorite color??? Trust me, its so much fun here, youll love it!

WOw! You have some stunning imagery, which is strong and paints a lovely picture for the reader I could feel the release of adrenaline from its cage, making my heart ...

I love how you gaze the dragons some good, in-depth personalities, same with your human characters. YOur writing is strong and Sarkia has a nice narrative voice. I love this ...

So, have I mentioned there is no possible way you could be fourteen? because your writing gives off this really mature vibe (In a good way, trust me) This poem ...

You rhyme. Mad props just for that! Now, I dont watch lost, becuase it confused me, but just readin your poem, I can guess that the relationship is full of ...

Loved it! It was an interesting perspective choice, from a rubber ducks point of view. Wow, very original. YOu really played with it to. The reader can feel the strong ...

That was really good! My favorite part of poetry is figuring out the meaning, so I'll assume this meaning is about two men in love. Amazing peice I loved it, ...

That was pretty awesome! (Even though I dont know what 'Beowolf' is) I love your descriptions, they were strong and great, Like Nate said, your piece was super amazing and ...

Thats very awesome. I like how you repeated the line 'Poor Little Eraser Dog.' It made for brillant empiasies. I really liked this poem. That was really cute and simple! ...