wonderland

Oh, my god, you guys are so cute!!! Wickedwonder, you really look adorable. Your face has that shine which mine doesn't. :( I'm glad you think so, though, I'm pretty ...

For having five stars.

That was confusing until I found out the beginning was a dream. I'd suggest putting everything in his dream in italics, it would clear things up for the reader. I ...

(Bella) I smiled thinly at Olly, then let my hair hide my face again. I reached up to rub my necklace as the King of Fools was chosen. I cast ...

(Bella) I slipped through the crowd, grabbing whatever I could. I was looking for gold coins, gold bracelets, maybe a necklace anything I could sell or keep for myself. By ...

(Belle) I slipped back onto the stage, unnoticed, after taking my little break. I began to move in time to the tambourine, making sure that I was smiling. Later, I ...

for having a z-ed in your username

Is there a special order we post, or can it e random?? I know, stupid question.

(Belle) I danced along with the music, artfully watching the crowd for anyhting I could steal. A gold bracelet here, a watch there. There was nothing... nice enough, though, so ...

Okay cool. And sorry, it's so short. Im not used you making sheets like that. i like to make things up as I go.

Name: Isabella Elena (Mostly just called Bella) Age: she is 17 Gender: F Personality: She's a very strong willed young woman, who knows what she wants, and exactly when she ...

The cab driver held an outstretched grubby hand. I slapped down with a twenty as I threw open the door. "keep the change," I yelled. "Thanks," He yelled pulling away.I ...

My phone jumped to life on my bedside table. It echoed loudly throughout my small New York apartment. I reached across and flicked on the brown faux lamp illumanting the ...

Oh, it's not that I didn't enjoy it, It's just that you could have put in so much more, but, hey, I know that feeling. Feel better.

Alright, so I've read the first two chapters. and I really was to tell you that you ned to put emotion i your writing. Your last part had some emotion, ...