wonderland

Well, then. I ignored the warning, and I'm glad I did so. You have a special way of writing, putting minimal detail, but enough detail for your writing. I also ...

Um, I'm gonna stick with reviewing, not only because I love it, but because I have zero idea what the Can to USA exchange rate. Sad, aren't I?

Thats good, thanks!

Name: Rosetta (Rose) Walsh Age: 17 Gender: F Rank: Full mage Appearance: Long black hair, huge light blue eyes. She's pale and thin. Picture: 905562015.jpg Personality: She's very, very, very ...

I can and will review-General Fiction, Fantasy, Romantic, Action and Adventure. I can't do poetry, art/photography , or fan fiction, sorry. I'm also a harsh reviewer, I just don't sugarcoat ...

Grammar Now, with formatting, always start a new sentence with dialogue, which break it up and make it easier for the reader. Right now it's a big block of text ...

2 Before I knew it, police were swarmed around me and my co-workers, demanding things and asking questions. I could barely understand what was going on, the only thing I ...

AWESOME! I danced under that Arch! I still have it on video somewhere.

Firstly, I'd advise doing a Mary-Sue test. Which would help you figure out where you need help. Now, If you really can't do it, i'd suggest scrapping everything, and starting ...

5000 words, thats a noble word count. I am going to review one paragraph, and this review will be harsh. THis is becuase this is good, except for this one ...

Name: Isabella Amira Violetta Sanchez (Bella.) Age: 16 Gender: F Species: Faerie Weakness/Strength: She can fly. Can't control her powers well. Power: Some control over the elements Bio: She's very ...

Name: William Rose Age: 17 Gender: M Species: Vampire Weakness/Strength: For one, he can't go out in the sunlight. he also needs to regularly feed on blood. And he'll life ...

One male, one female.

Uh, could I join?

I'm going to be super harsh. Warning now. This whole thing was super cliche. Just the whole premise is has been done way too much, In child fairy tales. Especially ...