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910. Nice quote, subtracted for the advertisement.

I have never heard of any of those. 1. For the nights I can't Remember-Hedley 2.Candyman-Aqua 3. Shake*****-Marianas Trench 4.I like It- Enrique Iglesias Ft. Pitbull 5.Push-Marianas Trench

What has happened so far, you ask? I answer. Isabella Marie is a seventeen year old girl, who is also a stripper, working at the club, Delightful. The novel opened ...

heres Chapter 2!!! Part II (James): I watched her from a distance; arguing with her father: her black hair streaming down her back in long strands and her lilac eyes ...

Alright so, basically, What I see is potential. You could be a strong writer, but, to be frank, your grammar need work. You need to caps 'I' in places like ...

This just makes so much sense to life! Thanks sooo much!!

Agithy, so Firstly, the smileys Cute? yes Distracting? Very. I'd suggest replacing them with the computer symbols (:D, :) ;)) if you have to have them at all Second, Believability ...

Well, i'll answer all of those questions, in coming chapters. Oh, and her dad will come. Soon.

11/10 Wondering how thats possible? It's Captain Jack Sparrow, thats how and ohmigosh, its the best song ever.

8/10 The colors were distracting

I can't believe I haven't posted here yet.. Well, anyway, my favorite Bands (Favorite songs by them in parenthesis) Marianas Trench (Push, Vertigo, Say ANything, All To Myself, Cross my ...

THat is such a cute puppy!

Alright, this is gonna be my last chapter for a while. My mother asays Im not allowed to write until my winter break, so, Ill have to sneak my writing ...

7/10 + 1 bonus Pretty, but I dont know who Mcfly is. Bonus, because I love your caption.

Alright, I know you said just to give what I think, and I will, just after I touch up on your grammar You have He saw a white wolf staring ...