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I hate choosing names so much, so I just use filler names, then go back and find good name after

Hey. Here as requested. (I'm sorry if this review is terrible, Im tired.) So, it seems like the other people got onto your grammar/nitpicks/spelling case, so I won't repeat what ...

Legit, Bolt the superdog. Okay, yeah. I've actually only seen you in Chat.

ALright, so, I'm pretty new, so I haven't read the first chapter. That really doesn't matter for this review, becuase I want to say something about you beginning. Night found ...

IM not gonna beat that crazy goal from last month, but I could spend my time planning/reviewing. That be good.

Drugs are scary. I agree. Thisis MY haloween look! Lookie my eye! It took me fifteen minutes I didn't have. Photo 201.jpg Photo 202.jpg

Are you interested in doing reviews in the Advanced Critque section? Yeah! But Im so scared Ill do something wrong and get kicked off the site forever. Link me up! ...

American: 9 Asian: 1 Canadian: 3 English: 3 Filipino: 1 Finnish: 1 French: 1 Indian: 1 Irish: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1

Ohmigosh! That is actually pretty cool.

Okay., well, that was a very choppy time skip. What happened during those months! Annabelle and Joe just can't be that perfect couple They must have fought or something. And ...

Missing. I really dont know

Hey. ” I say as I stash the bag. Where did I say that??

Well, that was tough to read. I'm not sure if it's the spacing here, but your paragraphs are spaced oddly. But its just on you main work, so I'm gonna ...

Okay, so. It's a good start. At some points, like here, (Quoted below) You get to tell-y. Show me what her room looks, show the reader what she's feeling. Paint ...

Nate, you should just start a kindle blog on your blog Anyway, I super want a kindle for my birthday. I know its expensive, but I live in Canada! (THats ...