wonderland

Okay, so I know this is NaNo, but, whoa!! Describe everything around your MC. describe the emotions, the settings the sounds of the birds flying over the pond. When I ...

So, that was again, another very choppy timeskip. What happened during those two months? Something must have. Wirte now, its like we know what happens with the characters for a ...

9/10

5015! (That translates into 50.15%)

8/10 another NaNo avvie

1 I didn’t want to die. Who would? I died in a car crash, on a late Saturday night. It was painful, more painful then someone could ever imagine. Yet, ...

Actually I like it! YOu have very strong description, you didn't tell the reader too much, and that is awesome! The only thing you should work on is your emotion ...

Yup, I loved that book. Take away my man card if you want, but I am completely unashamed that I had a tear or two in my eyes at the ...

YOu actually liked of Mice and Men? Really? I found it pathetic! Oh, i'm WickedWonder, Or Wicked, or Double W or whatever. YOU can call me what ever you want, ...

Better, but not my best. I couldn't get the blues to match! My middle name is Afia, hence why its my byline. I like it much better then my first ...

Main Character

Uh, I'm not sure I can let my NaNo Not overshadow my All Hallows eve.

Not enough description, or emotion. Really get into what your characters are thinking, and what your characters are feeling. Go through the piece and describe. What does the hospital smell ...

Alright, so, I guess that was good. I want to mainly concentrate on your beginning. I'm going to be harsh, but you really shouldn't ignore this. So the beginning is ...

I wish! I have a parrty, and everyone'll tell me I ned to 'relax' before Nano. They'll take away my phone, so i cant phone in.