wonderland

I didn't watch the Telephone video. I watched the Video on Trial for it.

I quit riding becusase of many rasons, such as my instructor s ucked, and I need to concentrate on graduating I listen to canadian bands! Such as Marianas Trench, Hedley, ...

I would do this, but I'd totally be rejected. Plus, what would I write on?

What was I about to do? I clutched a bottle of vodka in my gloved hand, feeling the chilly wind bite my nose. Was I about to kill myself? Was ...

8/10 No. Thats now what I said.

10/10 i love Ka-Ching-Ha!

Alright, so that was a interesting beginning. I noticed something. In somplaces you describe too much Aeron Wynne died the day her son was born. While everyone else was fast ...

Thank you for making me realize I should stop Mary-Sue testing every MC I make.

You have a really choppy writing style that makes it unclear for the reader, truly what is going on. Did you randomly change from normal prose to a diary form? ...

Alright, so, your first couple of paragraphs were nice and descriptive, and I was reading, going ''oh, this is nice' and then I just became to descriptive. The night was ...

Alright, so, you have that type of writing style. I'm not saying it's bad, I'm saying that your use of vocab stuns me. You almost get too descriptive with take ...

Disclaimer-It's graphic, or not really, deepening on what you see as graphic. And I also want to say, that no, I've never done this to myself. (And if you have, ...

Alright! I told you I'd review you, didn't I? YOu have an amazing MC! She's delightful, all teenage and angsty! Perfect. You convey emotion well, which I love. I can ...

Alright So, here is another review, with a lesson in continuity. Continuity is Standing before me, bags still in hand, as though he had just arrived, was my older brother ...

InigoMontoya Thats right.