wonderland

Alright, so, firstly, I'm gonna say that it was kinda rude to advertise your work during a review. You could write on my wall, or PM me. Not in a ...

6/10 Who?

Yes, this is my first ever poem. It wasn't supposed to be a poem, but I guess it turned out to be one. This is who I should be Flicking ...

Wow, that was strong, and beautiful. I wouldn't go too far to say that I loved it, but, I did enjoy your sense of character. YOur prose is beautiful, and ...

9/10 Scary!

Well, for the rules and things, that was really good. I love ho you didn't have it as a human, but as a rose. Truthfully, I was all 'great. Another ...

Alright, so this story just seems a little generic and cliche. Think about it, even though I enjoy how you chose body image, because many girls and guys, like me, ...

Ah, sorry, it's NaNo. I'm not allowed to think too hard, or my brain may explode.

1 God, I always hated my life. It was always living in a fake reality smiling happily with my controlling mother and absent father. I sat in my tower bedroom, ...

One thing, yeah, I'm a girl. But other then that, awesome.

That was really hard to read. You should put a space in between each paragraph, just makes it easier for reader here. This site looses any formatting you may have ...

100/10 Lawl

Okay, you just shoved everything at the reader. It was all just detail, detail, detail. When I woke up that morning it was raining, something that's completely dreadful to most, ...

Purple is cool, there fore I thought you were cool

Thats a a pretty cute cat. And that was the only nice thing I had to say. Alright, so you just shoved description at the reader, just telling. Have now ...