wonderland

Yess. Still a poem. I have major conflicting emotions, can you tell? This one’s our song Everything we wanted This one’s for us Even when we weren’t I’ve gotten tired ...

Alright, so, thank you for putting this into a readable font. Now, what I have to say is that your character seems a tad mary-sue ish. How does she know ...

Alright, so, I can't read this. I have sight troubles, and I had to zoom and squint to read. What I could pick up, though, this was super choppy. FIll ...

Alright, so, I have a question. Does your font need to be green? I have a little bit of a sight problem, so that was hard for me to read. ...

I'm excited! Imma bringing my A-game to January 30th

Alright, so, I was very confused in the beginning. Very, very confused. What relation do Jessica and Eden have to the main character, and how does your MC feel about ...

10/10 Another Win

Alright, so, Interesting. Another thing that stood out about the scene below me was the bodies. The blood had long since dried and now perminently stained the ground where the ...

Alright, I did a character sheet (For her) and rewrote. What do you think? You should regret it. Out of everyone on earth, you should be the one feeling bad. ...

Alright, so, this was just a story to me, just a nice outline of a story. You could defiantly give more details. Always be asking yourself why anything in your ...

Alright, so, I like this, yes, it was an interesting beginning. For your first sentence I wanted to know what was going on, which is good, because thats the point ...

Awesome We should call it awesome.

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I do my nails every saturday night

Alright,so, this is interesting, and its good, it's got potential. I really loved your first stanza. It was strong and I could see thr thought you put into it. Forbidden ...