wonderland

Alright, so, that was short, very short. It is a raw spring day in fifth century Ireland where Bridgid, young daughter of the Ard Ri*, Kieran O'Rielly, is tending to ...

Serena I sat alone in my room in the Queen's palace, writing. I wasn't writing anything important, just in my journal, the one thing I did nightly. I played with ...

Kaede My horse, Kimmer, stood still as I mounted him. "Good boy." I murmured. Then I turned to look at Shadow and Ashrae, the two who would be under my ...

Alright, so, this was cute, but that was about it. I found this poem repetitive and somewhat bit boring. I didn't feel anything from it, and I want to feel ...

Alright, so, I feel like that was just a beginning. The piece in itself didn't give me much to go on, it just seemed like a bunch of words. You ...

Honestly, I was nervous about posting, and I still am. Honest reviews please? If I told you something, Something I’ve never said before Would you listen? Would you believe me? ...

Alright, so, that ws confusing, very confusing Whimpering like a frightened puppy Skye shrank before her step father as he lashed out, catching her on the side of her face. ...

Alright, so, I know a tiny bit about scripts, so I'll do my best. Joe: Baby, not now. Niki: But I baked you a cake, for your birthday Joey. She ...

Place holder. I need to think of a character

Alright, so, you move too fast. You transition through moods before the reader can get a grip on them. Try to slow down a bit, and add more details. Why ...

Again, Locked.

This is done! Yay, I got a 95% on my monologue! So, i don't need more advice, so, *Locked*

Rhos Rhos inwardly cursed herself. She was still sucking on her finger when her mother walked in. Rhos's eyes widened and she took her finger from her mouth. "Hello, mother, ...

Rhos Rhoswen stood up, twisting a little tendril of hair around her ring finger. THat was enough day dreaming for the night, She took up her sewing, threading the thread ...

Yup. Thats where I got the idea.