wonderland

Alright,so, it's in one of those states. Just that finished, but unfished state. some you need work on is the flow. Are you going to put this to actual music, ...

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On one warm, July night, at a university in Los Angels, seven young adults found a watch that could control the time. One person, a brilliant inventor, figures out how ...

@Mizzle-My whole length thing..I know. I struggle with making dialogue realistic, so now I tend to just write the speech, then go back and add everything else later. Thanks, guys ...

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3 There. He’s right there, with the sun sparkling over his chocolate brown hair. My heart fluttered. He was perfect, simply perfect. “Go.” Kara said, “just go talk to him.” ...

Alright, so, I have a couple of points here. I entered Mr. Nash’s room, and glanced at the clock. I sat in my assigned seat labeled “Mark”. I was the ...

Profile Name: Kieran Bell Age: 16 Gender: F Rank: Hero Superhero/Sidekick Parents: Nathaniel Bell (Mediumship) and Kira Scott (Sonic Scream) Appearance: Kieran stands at about 5'10. She's wisp thin, w

Alright, so, I'm slightly confused as to whats going on. Very confused, actually. Don't be afraid to put more details in, answer such questions as 'why', 'what', 'when', 'who', and ...

Alright, so, I though this was going to be some lovy dovey poem about how someone's lover died in their arms. Thank you for that pleasant surprise. I really enjoyed ...

So, this did very well when I first posted. Now, i think I've improved it a tad by adding bare punctuation. What do you think? This is who I should ...

Alright, so, I could see that this is a snippet. But you have no description or detail, and that sightly bothers me. I have about zero idea whats going on ...

Name: Isabel Position: Weapons mistress Age (17 and older, unless you are the apprentice): 20 Sex: F Personality: She's quick and smart, quick to loose her temper if anyone says ...

Drama-like acting, like basically my whole life. What does wickedwonder make you think of?

Alright, so, good beginning. A couple of things confused me She had a slim, perfect body, she was perfect. The use of perfect twice here didn't work. She was sharp ...