wonderland

Alright, so, Instead of using two POVs per chapter because that will confuse the reader, why not just give them separate chapters? That will let you give the reader everything. ...

Profile-under construction Name Gender Age Race Appearance Skills Weapons Personality History Gryphon~ Name Gender Age Appearance Skills Personality History

Profiles~Under Construction Name: Alexander Rose (Alex) Gender: M Birth Date: July 12, 1993 Died at the age of: 18 Cause of Death: He died in a mass murder Personality: He's ...

Camryn | Lab I stood with the others, looking around. The lab was actually well-lit, not exactly like what you would see in the movies. We were all perched differently, ...

Since I am the mistress of paraphrasing, this spoiler shall contain a one to two-sentence summary of each chapter Chapter 1-We are introduced to the main characters, Melody, Josh, Marty ...

Alright, so, woah. After such a greatly done prologue, I started reading this one and my confused metre was raised. THe first three paragraph gave me so much information you ...

Alright,so, wow. That was very good, actually. Honestly, with a cheesy title like 'Kiss Of Death' I was assuming it'd would have something to do with cheesy vampires. I'm still ...

Kieran Bell|Hero High-Outside of School I looked around, pushing my hair from my eyes. I stood around with a bunch of girls I had just met, listening to whatever they ...

Isabel I sighed as I entered the weapons room. I looked around all the knives and swords and guns and I shivered. “Beautiful.” I whispered. They were all beautiful. I ...

Isabel "Weapons mistress." I said coolly. I angled the dagger so that the the sun glinted off it, "I think I'm perfectly qualified for the job. I smiled a small, ...

Isabel|Docks I nervously played with a dagger as I waited. I wondered if it even mattered that I was a girl. I knew what I knew about guns and knives. ...

Um, I think Easy A is missing from that list. Gonne point that out.

Name: Rosetta Williams Age: 19 Dead for: two weeks Profession: Fashion designers assistiant Appearance: Wavy brown hair, big gray eyes. Her face is pale and oval. She's about 5'6, dressing ...

Alright, So, firstly, that was very choppy. Writing is put into paragraphs, that connect sentences together. Truthfully, that is just basic skills. But here, it just shows everything in a ...

Totally under construction Name: Camryn Griffiths Age: 20 Gender: F Appearance: She's about 5'1 with pale skin and black hair. Her bangs graze her eyebrows, making her eyes seem bluer ...