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Title? I'm Like A Lawyer With The Way I'm Always Trying To Get You Off (Me & You)-Fall Out Boy. Lets get this started? ahaha. Nahh. I'm so gonna fail. ...

I must be crazy, but I'm in?

A speech tag is just saying who is speaking, so, I said, He said, that type of thing.

Alright, so, you have a good start. Now you have too add details and description to hook your reader and make your story an ace one. Describe everything. Your characters, ...

Alright, so. I was hoping for more killings. I really was. But, I wasn't dissapointed, espically, with this line, as I told you already “I’d be frolicking in meadows and ...

Alright, so, um, I'm not sure what to say. The character you describe is a major mary-sue, and it's hard to like this piece. I can see where your going, ...

the song. If you listen, listen all the way through. I used a writing prompt that said to use the first line of a song. He woke up from dreaming ...

Alright, so, that was slightly incestuous. Just slightly, though, nothing too major. So, your little story leaves some questions. Why would he attempt suicide, and why? Answering these questions will ...

Alright, so, did you know I hate Valentines day? Anyway, being in my nature, I found these more sappy then sweet. I'm sorry, I'm negative. The first two were short, ...

Alright, so, that was short. Add to it! Add details, to make the scene and setting. Add thoughts and emotion to your characters to make them seem alive, and for ...

Alright, so, slow down, and add a ton of emotion and details to captivate and hold your reader. You rush through every scene, so it seems like you are building ...

Alright, so, Um, okay? This didn't really make sense to me, or at al. Lyrics usually have some meaning that the reader/listener could relate to. This didn't have that vibe. ...

Alright, so Your title really got me. And I've been on Unicorns this week, so good. However, you had a lot of detail, but didn't really describe the settings or ...

Rated for the content. I swear, It'll go down for a bit. And if someone could give me a better name then Diana Justice, suggestions are welcome. My mother always ...

9/10 Crazy truth