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Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Wohoaa!! Love. Of. My. Life. lunapic_130361169628639_1.jpg And I bet you thought it'd be a person.
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
#19 Fairydust Sparkly fairydust They say it makes you fly-gives you wings Redbull does the same thing. I think I'm on Fairydust. When I'm with you, I think I could ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
#18 I’m past the point of caring. I’m almost more numb then before, if that is possible. I’m back in my bubble, Where I feel nothing I rather like my ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
#17 Fuck you. Fuck you for thinking you're so great when you're clearly not. The world doesn't revolve around you, bitch. It's clearly something you don't know. You believe that ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
#16 Oxymoronic at best- With your wide eyes and lovely lies Ironic at your worst- Promising me you'll never leave, kissing and telling behind my back I excepted it I'd ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
Total. Word. Vomit. #15 Don't make me draw the line. Of course, that would be stupid, since you've crossed the imaginary line too many times. And of course, I always ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
#14 Lipstick lies and lullabies thats what you told me first you wanted to keep me blind, keep my kisses on your warm cheek Innocent truths and wicked wonderings thats ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Rename The User Above You
IRunWithScissors That is all.
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
# 13 Romantically, nothing could ever change I'd rather stay away from the impending heart break In reality, the stars in the sky twinkle above us to watch us cry ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Clostrophorical: Chapter 1: Somebody
Alright, so, yes, you need to slow down. I got through maybe three quarters and was really confused. Slow down and go through every characters emotions, making it clear to ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Nameless
Alright, so, woah. That was pretty fantastic. I enjoyed how you set up the narration, it felt to me like it was two different people narrating. I'm not exactly sure ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: The Mysterious Girl in Black 1
Alright, so, It's good. It's coming around. However, you have a lot of description in some places, and less in other places. You have to sort of smooth things out, ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Tell Me I'm A Wreck.
Alright, so, you have a good beginning with the making of a solid plot line. You need to slow down and describe more, however, you pass over points that could ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Park Bench!
Seriously. I was all 'I needa write a poem!' and IshaThePirate was all 'Write me a poem on a park bench!' So I did. This is the result The old ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
# 12 She used to be a stunner With her silky black hair, and wild smile Plant her raspberry lipgloss kisses everywhere You'd follow her to the ends of the ...
Apr 16, 2011