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Re: Kate v. Zane
Hello, my name is Kate. This was pretty well written! Although, I have a few comments: “Please stay?” she pulls her bangs out of her eyes 'she' would not be ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Drowning. After the break up.
Hello, Katie here. :) Good job! Levan caught most of the grammatical errors. So, I won't bother being repetitive. I felt bad for Andre, but his anger threw off the ...
Oct 21, 2009 -
Re: The Forest of Secrets
Hello, I'm Kate. This was pretty well written! You did a good job at describing what was happening now, but just as the others said, it raises many questions and ...
Oct 20, 2009 -
Re: Strange Love III-The butterfly effect
This is well written. Great job! I am a "newbie",and have never written a review before. But here it goes. You definitely made me feel sympathy for X and Y. ...
Oct 19, 2009
