wolfcub25

I absolutly love the Lion King. It is a great movie and an interesting choice to write a fan fiction about. A few things as the others have pointed out ...

This is such a good effort for your first attempt. Well done, I like how you have made up your own words, and definatly got the reference to the clock ...

A very creative piece. I love how you did the run on lines which makes for an interesting read. Well done annd keep up the good work.

This is a great piece of poetry. I love the depth and emotion that draws the reader in. I agree that the line "Your oxygen was the smell of my ...

Hey, this was great, well done! Keep up the good work :D Just one thing #6 in cons is it supposed to be 'Colleagues'? -wolfcub25 Ps: Merry Christmas

Thank you very much for the tips and I will be sure to follow them and add details to the piece. I think when I wrote this I knew what ...

Ok, thanks for the comment. I know it sounds more like just a creative writing than a novel. But I'm new at it and I appreciate any opinions Any suggestions ...

Whimpering like a frightened puppy Skye shrank before her step father as he lashed out, catching her on the side of her face. "How dare you!" he roared, his words ...