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I agree with you all about the repetative plot part, but I still thought it was a great book all the same.

Please finish quickly! I need to babble about it to someone!

This book really caught my eye when I saw it in the bookstore and I knew I just had to get it. I absolutly loved it! It was just so ...

Yaaaaaay you posted! I like it. Very fluent and poetic. But who am I to critique poetry? Keep it up! :D ~Wolfy P.S.- like my new signature?

Black Panter, What were you doing on here at 3:00 in the morning? *tisk tisk tisk*

Hey everyone! Thank you sooo much for the reveiws, its helped a lot. I'm still pretty new to YWS and writing in general so it's great to know that people ...

Hm an underwater city... seems interesting. I don't think there is enough in this post for me to reveiw, but keep writing. ~Wolf

This is amazing! (once again) There is so much emotion in this chapter and you illustrate it so well. I really wish I could write as good as you do, ...

Very good!

Hmm... interesting, but I like it. You could go a little more on the characters and the setting. Keep writing because this sounds like a promising story. A six-year-old killer... ...