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heyy, thank you for the review!

thank you buddyyy (:

Hello, thank you for the review! no need to apologize for being harsh, I enjoy having harsh reviews because it lets me know exactly what I need to do to ...

thank you for the review! I do want to point out that the capitalization, punctuation, and random spaces are part of the formatting of this poem, and are completely just ...

Thank youuuuu

You hit some very good points, and I appreciate all of the kind words. Though the watercolor and porcelain part is written exactly the way that I meant for it ...

Thank you so much

Ah, well thank you very much, pal (:

The lack of imagery in the second stanza is due to it being a back story/explanation of the first stanza, if that makes any sense at all. I have like ...

Thank you for the review! (:

The lack of imagery in the second stanza is due to it being kind of a back story/explanation to the first stanza, if that makes sense. Thank you for the ...

okay will do, i apologize.

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Oooo will review later my friend

hello ash here for a review (: so a few things before i get into it. "I never did anything to deserve this. please, take the air out of me, ...