wizartjay

I do not think the pacing is terrible, in fact it felt perfect to me. Maybe in your mind you wanted the story to go longer, that is why you ...

I like how you have written it like a real person's diary. I really believed you were using this platform to tell your own story, so kudos to that, your ...

That was really good! I love it when while reading a story I am able to imagine the scene in my mind, and your writing did that, just like the ...

Hi avianwings47! I just love when writers use the symbolisms to tell a bigger truth to the world, and the story feels even more live when the truth they are ...