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Re: Gravity (Prologue)
Hey, I think this is a good start for your story. It introduces your characters nicely and makes you want to know more about them. I am very curios where ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: Motel 66 (chapter 1)
Hey there ! So first I have to say, that I absolutely loved this chapter. And second, I kind of suck at reviewing, but I'm gonna give it a shot, ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: The Girl Who Cried Defeat, Chapter One
Awe, that was such a great story. I can tell that you put much thought and consideration into your work. The first scene at the world meeting was really funny. ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: Eagle (UsUk)
Hey, first of all I want to thank you for writing such an amazing Hetalia fanfic. I like how you explored America's and England's unique, complex relationship. You have good ...
Jul 12, 2013
