wishonafallingpetal

This is a very different poem. It's a bit dark, but expressed well and smoothly. Keep writing, I like it.

I liked this. You took a feeling that many people have and expressed it well. I think that formatting and spelling could have been done more carefully, but the idea ...

You can see the smile in her eye And the pink in her cheek as she Looks at that special boy. She loves Him so much and can always see ...