wishonafallingpetal

I'm confused. Really, that's all I can say. A rope, A gun, poison or knife. Whatever was needed to take my life. There was no angel to account for, not ...

This poem is a little bit confusing. Love is hard Hard like a stone A stone easy to hold To Hold but hard to brake. Right here you say that ...

Written for a friend. The energy keeps dwindling from day to day The will to keep trying is just fading away To keep breaking down walls is a feat too ...

This is really good. I am pretty much at a loss for words. I only have a few comments. This line: And the most strangest words come from your mouth ...

This is a good poem. The last stanza I especially like: This can be a calming insight of ourselves, just to be you and no one else. It has a ...

This is hard to understand and impossible to describe How I feel has always been a secret, something to hide Now what I want to say is escaping my mind ...

This is good. It's very creative and a fresh take on an old idea. My only problem is that you're very sporadic with the length of your stanzas. You go ...

This is really good. I like how you went from questioning nature to the reader and then brought the realization of how to improve general things. I especially like this ...

I'm not too sure I like this poem. It's something I've heard before and you contradict yourself in it a couple times. Though you don't care; your eyes will always ...

When that feeling tries to come, I beg you to push it away Or else it will eat at you day after day You’ll yell and you’ll cry, making a ...

I really really love this poem. I can't think of anything bad to say about it except that the first line is a bit off with the rest of the ...

This is an interesting poem. The idea of only being able to think of one person and missing them and having your heart broken is a bit played out. You ...

This is good, but there are a few points where it could improve. It is a bit difficult to follow. When you say "watch those around you die" in the ...

This was good. I especially loved the last verse. I can't really think of anything bad to say about it, so good job.

This is really great. At times it falls a little flat with emotion and it starts to lose its flow near the end but other than that, it's good.