winters

I'm reading Starfist: Hangfire by David Sherman and Dan Cragg. It's good if you like military science fiction, like I do.

It was good. I can see the lack of description as plot teqhnique for introducing the events of the prologue in later chapter. If the soldiers and scientists aren't especially ...

It was good. I can see the lack of description as plot teqhnique for introducing the events of the prologue in later chapter. If the soldiers and scientists aren't especially ...

I'm winters. I love Battlestar Galactica and am anxiously waiting for the next season. I write primarily science fiction, and I've been working on an epic novel I hope to ...

There should be spaces between dialogue and new paragraphs. I noticed a few places where the tense switches from past to present. Overall, its pretty good. Reads like a post-war ...

Pretty good. There are a few spelling/grammatical errors(such as 'where' instead of 'were') but otherwise was very well-written. If you're going for a heavy military theme, you might want to ...

Hello, writing people. I'm Winters, as you can most likely tell, and would call myself a writing savant. I love Sci-fi, and will be working on a major SF project ...