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  • Poetry » Horror, Other
    Re: Etymology

    Wow, this was an interesting read, I highly enjoyed reading this poem. As I said, I am so bad at reviewing other peoples works, but I will try my hardest. ...

    Dec 3, 2014

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Fiction
    Re: Sky Haven

    Blackwood, I'm here to give you a sloppy review ^.^ Mmm, I did really like this poem. I think it was really cute. The title was the reason I chose ...

    Aug 25, 2013

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: The Demoness

    Wow. Just, that's all I can say right now, this was just so, I can't say amazing, because, this was far better then that. I can't find any words at ...

    Aug 25, 2013

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: The Lady With The Lullaby

    Wow, this was quite good, I enjoyed reading it! You have a very nice writing style, you have an amazing imagination to write like this. I really liked how you ...

    Aug 25, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.

    Wow, like just wow. This literally brought me to tears. I can't even explain all the emotion put into this, it kind of just all poured out my eyes. This ...

    Aug 25, 2013

  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical
    Re: I'm a Little Writer

    Ahaha, this was cutee/adorable. I was like "Ooooh, this sounds cute!" *reads* I liked it, it was small, but really cute. I always say thing, but I looove short poems, ...

    May 27, 2013

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Firsts

    Wow, just wow, this is what i love to read. I found it a bit confusing to read though. But it was really really great. Maybe just fix up the ...

    May 20, 2013

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Unreadable

    Oh hi there c: The length of this most definitely caught my eye, I love short poems, a lot a lot. But anywhoo, my best try at a good review. ...

    May 20, 2013

  • Poetry » Other, Other
    Re: Deleted

    YEEY, I just had a fit!! You put it up!! ANyway, like I said last night c; It's sooooo good, and I love it! "“Do you have a sharpener? My ...

    May 16, 2013

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Black and Blue

    Hey there, winter here to give a review! So here it is. This was a very good and short poem. I liked how you made the start of each stanzas. ...

    May 16, 2013

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: Yoko

    Welcome Clair, I'm here to give you the best review I can. "She watched as the sun bled across the ocean, painting it a vibrant tone of salmon-pink. The sky ...

    May 16, 2013

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Crossfire

    Well, this story was written really well, it expressed all the emotions beautifully, and easy to read. This story really drew me in, and I wanted to read more. But, ...

    May 14, 2013

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Lily

    Heyo, Winter here, I gonna review this for you, although, I'm not the best at this, but I'll try. This was interesting to read, it was good yes, but, I ...

    May 14, 2013

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other
    Re: The Fabric of Me

    I've never been good at poems, but this was wonderful. I really enjoyed it. "I murdered all of my imaginary friends and broke the legs of the evil thoughts that ...

    May 14, 2013

  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction
    Re: Teenage Love

    Heyyya, its Winter here!c: Firstly, "Silly me;" I just love that, I feel its really putting the emotion, that teens have, across. Its make this poem run smooth, which is ...

    May 13, 2013


If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain