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Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
*high five right back* I'm agender and word on infodumping being a sweet, sweet temptation. My particular vice is tangential ramblings about obscure religious sects. Also architecture. I'm super excit
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Stepping Strings : Prologue 1-B
I'm nb myself so I'm always looking for a way out of that box :D Anyway, the amount of thought you've put into worldbuilding definitely shows even though not a ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Monachopsis, Chapter One: Children Yet, the Tale to Hear (Part Two)
Ah, thanks for that nitpick. There WAS supposed to be a "were" in there x_x stupid speed typing... And thanks for all the other feedback, too. The details of how ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Monachopsis, Chapter One: Children Yet, the Tale to Hear (Part One)
Thanks for the feedback! It's all really helpful. On the Hare thing%u2014the idea I'm working with is that pretty much everybody in Wonderland is some variation of anthropomorphized animal, with ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: My name is Kelly-Marie and I'm a murderer
Ah, I'd assumed mom and step-dad were on their way home as well! You're welcome, in any case.
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: This Lightning Storm, Chapter One: Gilded With Ice
Thanks for the feedback! Do you have any suggestions for how to integrate magic into the earlier sections? I've been poking at it for a while and I sort of ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: This Lightning Storm, Chapter One: Gilded With Ice
Hi, thanks for the review! Yes, Vivienne is supposed to be a total jerk. Part of the reason I started writing this was to experiment with how callous and pointlessly ...
Jul 16, 2014
