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wind rattles the blinds

Monachopsis

Third draft of a (really insufferably demanding) behemoth of a Wonderland: A New Alice fanfiction.
  • Monachopsis | Chapter Three: Driftel (1/2)

    It was no good trying to extract more detail than that—the ripping agony blotted out whatever snatches of the other her’s life she might have gleaned.

    9 min read
  • Monachopsis | Chapter Three: Driftel (2/2)

    Madder swallowed against the lump in her throat. “But it means something’s wrong with me. That I’m dangerous, and—and some kind of monster.”

    10 min read
  • Monachopsis | Prologue [Second Revision]

    A girl wakes up in an unfamiliar land, with no memory of who she is, where she came from, or how she came to be here.

    9 min read
  • Monachopsis | Chapter One: The Fall (1/2)

    For months, she’d been looking forward to this; beginning to train with weapons meant she’d finally maybe start to belong in Queensquare.

    9 min read
  • Monachopsis | Chapter One: The Fall (2/2)

    “Not the gardens,” Madder said again, softer. “Half an hour, or I’m leaving without you. I don’t want to get caught.”

    7 min read
  • Monachopsis | Chapter Two: Across the Board (1/2)

    If she acted as if nothing had happened, then nothing had. (Note: chapter breaks in a really awkward place; it's all one long scene. Sorry about that)

    8 min read
  • Monachopsis | Chapter Two: Across the Board (2/2)

    All she wanted to do was curl up and wait for the derisive mutterings in her mind to stop.

    10 min read


Once you have people's attention, you have a greater responsibility to tell them something of value.
— Tobias Forge (Ghost B.C.)