williegonnawonkya

I've been trying to think of something to write but its just not coming to me. I thought about brainstorming idea's but when I sit there and think nothing comes ...

Wow! This was really good the description was excellent it was almost as if I was there! Great job!

This is such a sad poem. I really enjoyed it: the description was perfect, I could picture everything! The wording was very well done and the flow was nice and ...

Theres none in Canada in Toronto.... :'( Why couldn't I be in the other Toronto. Me when I saw Toronto, "Yeah!" After I notice that its in Atlanta, "Noooo!" Have ...

I really enjoyed you piece; though like that last comment "I will never die", did not need to be repeated like that. If you choose to keep that line though, ...

When you get the time please review my poem. I am new here and I need some help too if you don't mind.

Pirate, cyclopes. That's what they called me. Some of them still do. Clumsy ole me. It hurt then, hurts now. If it happened to you, you'd be hurt too. You ...

This was very well done. In the beginning I wasn't feeling much of the emotion. Later on though in those last few lines they hit me. So in the future ...

Okay. I don't have many emotions because of it though so I couldn't seem to bring any out. I am was young to remember anything more then parents coming to ...

Dust clouds fill the streets. Screams fill the once calm air. People run for their lives. Loved ones gone missing. Many wounded. Most of them lay dead. Hands waving for ...

Wow this was really well written. I was really caputured by the title mostly. Keep writing.

Hi! :D

I really did enjoy this. It reminds me so much about the things happening around me now. I can sense the pain that Levi is having.I know it hurts to ...