williamwordsworth

Legend tells of a beautiful Princess. A beauty so rare that people were said to have fainted before the face. Her skin was as perfect as a china dolls, porcelain ...

I like this but am confused by what you're writing about? Can you tell me?

Whoa. I absolutely loved that. In the begining I presumed the narrator was a man because he was speaking about this girl so beautifully. The ending was a great suprise. ...

I've always thought that everyone must be-even just a little-bisexual. We fall in love with people, not genders. That line is definitely sticking with me. We fall in love with ...

Oh wow. I really loved this. Really describes being in love and all that beautifully. It really traps the reader. Very relatable. And I actually checked and I can't fault ...

I like how you wrote this, the suspense and the dark. Gripping. A bit confusing though, especially the end bit, just the way you worded it, I had to read ...

I really understood what you were saying. With all the bad out there, it's nice your still looking for the good. I can definitely relate. Nice poem. (:

I would love to see more of this. I love Harry Potter humour! A great read.

Spelling mistake; The tackled the man and saved her life Only fault I could find. Really well done.

I absolutely love this peom. It's beautiful. I don't really have anything to say. It's beautiful. I already say it but it deserves to be said again.

I really like this story and I'm looking forward to hearing more but I was a little confused with the girls name, was it Amy or Amerie? I was on ...

You might want to go over it with a fine tooth comb to check for spelling mistaskes. And i love how you decided to spell Hellena, with two l's. (;

what are you don't amber? i presume that's supposed to be what are you doing? you might want to change that.

absolutely beautiful

WOW. i really loved this. beautiful.