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Thank you for your intensive review! I'll try harder to avoid religious conflicts within my writing, and I understand how Desmond can be a real "arse". On one final note, ...

Thank you. I tried to break the story into readable "chunks" that could be read without breaks, but I seem to have failed. I am sorry if this violated the ...

No problem! I hope you can get to my review soon? I posted on your thread. :D

Well, if you were willing to review the rest of Day 1 and Day 2, I would be thrilled

I have italics on the document I'm writing in, but for some reason, they don't show on here on YWS. It's odd. I have some fun things in store, but ...

Well Desmond's home situation is a little bit of a secret. It's also part of the reason his character is so strong-willed. I agree with making Emanuel a more menacing ...

Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave them, and I will strive to make each chapter better! :) ~wildwildcat

Don't worry, the answer comes in Part 2. ;) I really appreciate your continuous reviews, and I thank you for the positive feedback! Cheers ~wildwildcat

Hey Snow! It's really, really, really great so see so many constant reviews on my works! Desmond's age is pretty young, and it's sort of "malleable" I could say at ...

Thanks for your constant reviews, Snow! In this installment, I cringe at some of the mistakes I made, and want to assure you that I'm doing my best to change ...

Hello Snow, I'm really glad that you took the time to give my literary work a review. I definitely agree with your opinion to give Gerald a better description, and ...

Thanks for all the nitpicking! The small grammatical errors have probably been fixed on the newest version of this, but i just haven't updated it yet. I really appreciate your ...

No problem!

I have read Percy Jackson, and oddly enough, you are the second person today to comment on the similarity! If you enjoyed this, I really encourage you to read Day ...

I encourage you to read the rest of Day 1 and the beginning of Day 2! Thanks for your comment!