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Thanks!

I love the further analysis you did! The piece spawned from an amusing thought I had, but not all of those implications were in my mind when I wrote it.

Thank you very much, I will make things more consistent!

Thanks for the tips!

Thanks! I love the way you used very little effort and simply copy and pasted a random review onto my paper! It was wonderful of you to spend such little ...

Thank you, I'll be sure to implement some more scenes of realism within the pages, especially during the dialogue and the building. I am incredibly grateful for your review! Thank ...

Thank you for your thoughts! I really want to have a multiple sided view on this, so I really appreciate you giving your comment!

Anks so much for tips on easing into the reality of the situation! I really appreciate the points you have made, and will strive to add or alter things to ...

Thanks so much for a long review! I will definitely take to heart your thoughts on elongating the scenes and Elizabeth's character development! Thanks you! ~wildwldcat

Thanks. HINT: It just might have something to do with the gun. Try thinking about it literally. Also, I'm switching a few things up with this chapter, so it's quite ...

Hey there Black, thanks for the stellar review! I understand the whole "chosen to save the world" idea is quite overused in modern literature. Thanks for expounding on that. Machel ...

Hello, thanks for responding quickly! I understand the angel is odd, and his speech and mannerisms seem quirky. I meant for Machel to be different, but perhaps I took it ...

Thanks for the tip on how to implement that clearer!

One final thing: I'm not sure how well I conveyed this, and it might be better in Day 1 Part 2 or Day 2, but Desmond isn't actually a bad ...

Thanks! I understand that Desmond comes off as bitter and callous, so rushing into a burning building is not what you'd expect him to do. I may change his personality ...