wildnaturespirit

I am doing a bit of mythology research because I have really weird dreams about all sorts of were creatures. :P I am having a bit of trouble finding anything ...

That was enjoyable. It was fast paced and would make an excellent begginig for a story. The ending really left me hanging. Is it a dead silence? or a waiting ...

:D Ok, it really seems like this might be headed somewhere interesting but, your readers may have difficulty staying interested. This part seemed a little bland. Like flounder (you know, ...

Wow, that was really entertaining. I love how your character thinks. You know, just the fact that she thinks. People seem so mindless sometimes. That is the beauty of first ...

Ok... so this is like the first half of chapter 1. The revision is taking me forever! I think I am just going to totally rewrite the second half. But ...

This was a pretty good story and wasnt empty like most stories from animal points of view. I really enjoyed the ending because of the loving sadness it held. But ...

Ok, this is a really interesting idea. :D But I think that your first paraghraph could be better. It seems like you are trying to cram information in really fast, ...

I dont like music while I write, but before I write listening to music helps ideas start moving. It only works if I listen to the music and think about ...

Sorry, I was working on revising this. But I got busy with school stuff. I hope to have it revised by next week, or I might just do it tonight.

my neighbors watching some sort of action horror film with the speakers turned up to earsplitting. -_- I won't get any sleep tonight. Whole bunch of screaming and gun fire. ...

Thanks for the reviews! I really appreciate it. I edited it, and tried top fix some of the things you all mentioned. I hope its an improvement.

Sounds interesting, I want more. Prehaps a little more 'wolf imagery', wolves use scent and sound more then sight. When saying something is coming you might want to have your ...

Prologue The wolves howled from the wooded depths of the Terracordula*1 Mountains, as a circle of strange creatures began to assemble. In the middle, a raven with a serrated beak ...

Chapter 1 “Last day of school, Fern. Wake up!” came Dad’s voice from the hall. Sunlight was pouring into the room. I shoved the covers off. It all must have ...

I wrote this a few years back for my language class when we were talking about WWII ---------------- Schorching fire Burning flames The pheonix screeches A trill of pain Silence, ...