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Re: Finding Olive~chapter 1
Okay, so I really liked this. A lot. For a variety of reasons. The short, choppy sentences worked. Amazingly. They portrayed the panic Olive feels throughout the piece extremely well. ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Luna 1.0 (edited)
I'm new here, so obviously I haven't read your first draft, but I'm really likin' what you have so far. It definitely made me want to keep on reading and ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
A little bit of everything, I suppose. It's been quite some time since I've written anything and I'm trying to get back into it now. This seems like a great ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi! Fresh meat here! Just joined today and really glad I found you guys. :) I'm looking forward to reading some great work on here!
Jan 8, 2010
