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Silversun, I only just read this and wow. Thank you. I needed to read something beautiful today and this was perfect, exactly what I needed. Please let me know when ...

and that's not such a good thing? will work on it. thankyou!!

Elitehusky, Thank you so much!! 'You may have a future as a professional writer' - You have no idea how great that made me feel=D=D!! Yes, I do aim to ...

Hey fhwdf! I liked the poem. I would rate it 5 though, mainly because I only understood the poem because you said you wrote it in science class. 'volts', 'respiration' ...

When was the last time you really just smiled? A true smile with nothing in it but a pleasant feeling. When was the last time you really enjoyed yourself? Forgot ...

Thank you guys for the response!!:) Most of the confusion is probably because I haven't used punctuation at all, which I should have. Anima - I wasn't sure about removing ...

Loneliness - 6.11.09 Like warm waves in mid afternoon lapping gently on the empty seashore, My heart feels love touch, But not embrace, Like how the still waters weigh on ...

Evil exists because moral absolutes do exist. Moral absolutes exist because we can objectively measure the values of moral codes using logic. Logic can be used as an objective measuring ...

Hey s.kiwalker!! Thankyou for pointing it out. It is supposed to be 'plain'. And thankyou for your comments:) Yeah, they were a cool group of classmates. All in different colleges ...

I look around and can't help smiling When I think of what I see You'd see a haphazard, messy classroom With students left too free But let me tell you ...

Hey Dreamwalker=) Thanks a lot for reviewing. I did learn a lot about what I should be looking out for when I write. I took care of the nitpicks that ...

Her arms were moving in quick, fluid movements, her hands taking a hundred different shapes every minute; it seemed like they had a life of their own, dancing to the ...

Hey!! I did not expect you to finish it so... directly/openly at the end. I thought that you would just give clues so that it is obvious. Because I know ...

Hi Pacific sky!! The story line is very nice, a typical first crush happy ending:) I think that I'll comment on some of the words that you've used that are ...