wiccaryan

He's a boy...and i disagree. I am a fifteen year old, and the main character is based upon myself....and thats they way i think and talk etc.

Why did you have to wait untill the 5th chapter to make it good? Your forst 2 were okay, then the next to (Sorry to say) but a little bit ...

I know i'm not supposed to argue with crticismn, but i would like to defend myself and my work. The reason we go into Nick's head is because it is ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone, and i look forward to the updated versions. as a point....Tristan is a BOY, i realise this issue is a review in in i have ...

Thank you all so far for your reviews, its nice to know that people really like my work and are enjoying it. Just a side point....all of Tristan's thoughts were ...