wiccaryan

He's a boy...and i disagree. I am a fifteen year old, and the main character is based upon myself....and thats they way i think and talk etc.

Hey everyone, well when i first submitted chapter 2 of "Witch" it was in the same post as chapter 1, and i quickly learned this was far too much to ...

I enjoyed this piece, but i didn't love it. Characters seem to be capable of development, but the emotional foundations and depth are lacking thus far. Also, the use of ...

Hey everyone, well when i first submitted chapter 1 of "Witch" i wasn't 100% satisfied with it to begin with, then people started pointing out things that i already knew ...

Why did you have to wait untill the 5th chapter to make it good? Your forst 2 were okay, then the next to (Sorry to say) but a little bit ...

I know i'm not supposed to argue with crticismn, but i would like to defend myself and my work. The reason we go into Nick's head is because it is ...

Here is chapter 5 of "Witch" - after some past reviews i have went back and edited chapters 1-4. Please review and leave comments. Chapter 5 Precognition The pale, dead ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone, and i look forward to the updated versions. as a point....Tristan is a BOY, i realise this issue is a review in in i have ...

I actually get this poem, it seems people don't This poem is a train of consiousness, right? It's someones thoughts. I'm guessing its someone who is really distraught or truly ...

I love this poem, it was so beautifully tragic. I'm really unsure on the format and style, its very broke which actually relates to the characters feelings, a clever thing ...

I love this poem, its wonderfully eerie. I have to say at first, i thought it was about a woman suffering a miscarriage, i have no idea whether this is ...

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book? Chapter 1 & 2 Chapter 3 and 4 i would like as much detail as you ...

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book? Chapter 1 & 2 Chapter 3 and 4 i would like as much detail as you ...

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book? Chapter 1 & 2 Chapter 3 and 4 i would like as much detail as you ...

I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book? Chapter 1 & 2 Chapter 3 and 4 i would like as much detail as you ...