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Gabby, I swear this is amazing. You're such a talented writer. (: Please update this soon! I can't wait to read more!

Sorry for the lack of updates, everyone! I have just been a bit blocked lately... I'll get on it soon! (: Thanks for the lovely comments! It truly means a ...

Hi there! :) She filled in the gap between us with just a few steps, and I wasn't expecting it, but didn't protest when she... -------------------------------------------------------------------------

Aww! Erin, this is wonderful! Your writing is so lovely! (: I can't wait to see what this plot developes into.

I think you're a talented writer. However, this story is so generic and cliche now more than ever. It felt like Twilight all over again, and though I am a ...

I like it. (: It's cute. However, if I'm being honest, I agree that it needs works. You said that you're more of a story teller than poet. However, you ...

You are an extraordinay writer! "Nothing is ever certain until you hear the rap on the door," tied it all together perfectly. It makes your heart drop for just a ...

I really enoyed this. You used extremely vivid wording, making it very possible to play it out in my mind. In my opinion, that is a key factor in being ...

This story is beautiful! I could see everything in my mind as I read it. I love your word choice! (: As far as grammar, you were lacking a few ...

can your inspiration be that cecil has a twin who likes tan girls on school papers. And then Clayre can have a bff that is perfect for Cecil's twin and ...

Your intro is wonderful. You used great diction and imagery. You set up your plot and character simply, but beautifully at the same time. This seems like it is going ...

This is beautiful! (: You're incredibly talented.

Thank you all. (: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll try and post more as soon as I have the inspiration. I've kinda been working on it for almost 2 ...

The last day of school. Thank you, God! I’ll miss Laurel this summer, but I am so glad to be away from school. Two months of summer, here I come! ...

Gabby, I love this! (: Please keep it going.