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Re: Everything to Loose
Good rhyming. Love the simplicity of it. It's short but too the point. I would suggest adding to it, but that's only my opinion. Like the last line best, and ...
Oct 18, 2010
Good rhyming. Love the simplicity of it. It's short but too the point. I would suggest adding to it, but that's only my opinion. Like the last line best, and ...
Oct 18, 2010