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Hmm...I think I'm gonna have to start reading your poems with 'pop-punk' in mind. Otherwise I'll just write them off as shallow. But yeah, these should prbably be in the ...

I rather enjoyed this one. It flowed well, and was certainly Cummings in heart. The images were well-used, as was the particular form. Good job.

Oy-- I suppose this means I shall be gradually integrating these into the system... After I get a few crits outta the way, of course