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Re: Flatline Squeal
Flatline Squeal The world is a whitewashed gray, and i see through half closed eyes, watching a granite sundial in the shade, and grasping at the sky for a sunrise. ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Hallelujah
I like it but some of it seems a bit choppy, and the change seems quite abrupt, almost staggering. The images are nice though and I like the way you ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: My Muse
[pre] My muse With a single kiss I’d never ask for you again, for my field-of-flower dreams would be enough. The roses would bloom indefinitely, and your cheeks would match ...
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: In My Dreams
[pre] In My Dreams Your smile resembles raspberry icing and your cheeks are made of ivory, carved to perfection and sprinkled with rose powder. Your eyes gleam like the moon ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Lady of the Lockers
[pre] Lady of the Lockers What’s so beautiful about you That makes heads turn and bland colored books Sound thwack upon the floor Seeming even more dulled with you as ...
Mar 19, 2008
