whackyjacky07

well my dialogue is spaced 1 *space* apart so...

moves a little fast. how ever i do like the 2 spereate account of wrighting, arik and kait, you should go with that, but each accoutn needs to be a ...

I really liked it, i think when you use wrods like 'sur-ren-der' etc. i get the feeling it is a robotic voice speaking without you having to tell me, its ...

That was very good,how ever i do agreee witha previous comment, give some hints about Harkin being a vampire. it was very good and it gripped me from the beginning.