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well my dialogue is spaced 1 *space* apart so...

The Glorious dragon ruler of Khazar, Dakar, sat upon his throne in the Province of paradise, wondering where it all went wrong, wondering how him and his clan were now ...

moves a little fast. how ever i do like the 2 spereate account of wrighting, arik and kait, you should go with that, but each accoutn needs to be a ...

oo hello jared, heard u had a blind and deaf dog :( i love dogs bless him. i have a dalmation called harvy he is just over a year old ...

I really liked it, i think when you use wrods like 'sur-ren-der' etc. i get the feeling it is a robotic voice speaking without you having to tell me, its ...

That was very good,how ever i do agreee witha previous comment, give some hints about Harkin being a vampire. it was very good and it gripped me from the beginning.

Vereor Caves are Dark places, usually, dark wet, dangerous! But with new technology, 8 Special Forces marines must clear out this one cave because of a nuclear leak 4 years ...

Heya Nariel, cant wait to start reading your stories. welcome!

Heya mate. i am new aswell. pm me if u wanna chat :)

starting to wright a horror story and trying to think of 'the survivor.' so cna you please do my poll

Heya everyone, my name is jack and i'm 13, i love to wright, that all realyl jsut hello