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i loved it but i think that it will make people want to read it more if you add in something like what this woman said or what the man ...

i personally think this is absolutly great and it has power and meaning and emotion to it. But i see where people would think that it's a little choppy. There ...

all i really have to say to that is WTF i dont really understand the poem and dont think there is much of the point gotten clearly across it's good ...

it's not bad but it could be better i just have a few tips first when you say: All the things I put myself through when I only thought I ...

i like it but try changing the beginning it's kinda weird..... and when you said: What am I saying? That's not a heart. It cannot love; I could tell from ...

This is really good but try making the spaces a little different it didnt run together very well. and instead of "fall and break a leg" try something maybe a ...

This is really good and i think it has a lot of depth to it. It's good as it is but if you feel like adding a little more meaning ...