werewolfconfessions

I'm really lazy, so I'm just going to quote the writers responses: "The temporal bone is the bone where your temporal lobe is. Like when you get a headache, you're ...

Thanks! What were your suggestions or adjustments? She's really interested in any help you could give.

THIS IS NOT MY WORK, FOR THE RECORD. It's my best friends, she doesn't have an account on here, but she wants criticism on her work. This is a piece ...

THIS IS UNDER CONSTRUCTION, SORRY.

Hi, I love how short this piece is, allows the reader to think more personally, little to no background information leaves a lot up to the audience. The only real ...

This is absolutely fantastic, completely well described, wonderful story. Sweet, caring, beautiful Lea. We'd been friends for the longest time and I could depend her for anything. She was the ...

I'm going to start by saying that this was absolutely beautiful. I just have a few things to say though You're just a bird trapped in a cage, you're just ...

This is really brilliant. You have an excellent flow of dialogue and a really nice, well thought out plot. I like the lack of background information, it leave a lot ...

Sometimes I wake up and I sob. I don’t cry, nothing leaks from my eyes or spills down my cheeks. There is nothing poetic and beautiful in what I am ...

depressed your character was. but i have to ask: is this character you? like you specifically? Be careful on how much you put out there of yourself as people tend ...

Whoa, deep. I love it when there's no names, just a story. Backward love story. Love it. Okay... I think the Pluto thing was really original. Oh, one thing... is ...

There is a building, tucked back, down the street. Inside, not a soul stirs. The building has a lobby, with clean white floors, and decorative plants. The welcome mat greets ...

This is beautifully written and quite frankly, a little disturbing, but I sense that's what you were going for. I think you write really well and I liked the sort ...

You're really very talented, and leaving things up for the readers to sort of guess about is clever. You should really watch your verb tenses though, but otherwise this is ...

You portray the anger that comes along with loving someone and losing them really well. This is very brilliant, you're really quite talented.