wellmanwriter

This is the prologue to what I hope will be my first published work. Constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated! ------- Prologue It is dark when they come. As if ...

Wow. That was pretty intense. "If" was a fine word when talking about a sports team making it to the playoffs, or when talking about someone dividing up the winnings ...

A few grammatical and spelling errors at the beginning and end, but all-in-all I'm pretty impressed.

Ha! That was clever. I always enjoy retellings of classic stories, and this one was up to par =]