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Fuzzy around the edges, mouth like shit flavored sandpaper, the sudden cranial rape that is the loud screaming coming from the basement runs nails down the inside of my head. ...

I love it you leave us hanging then BAM! soccer. I was waiting for the monster to come and eat you.

HAHAHAHAHAHA. Very nice I love this. Don't change a thing keep it seriously funny.

Very nice. You set up the scene in the first stanza well then give us so much to think about in the last. It was a might bit overwhelming but ...

The first line caught me, "Meanings wear words like you," I had to go back and reread it, not because I didn't understand, but to make sure I did. Your ...

I love when a poem can paint a vivid picture of violent acts in my head with few words. Brutality is what this makes me envision and I loved every ...

Nice! I read this then glanced at your age and was like no way! You had a few spelling errors, but otherwise no real grammatical problems. The only suggestion I ...

I like this. The way you paint a vivid picture using metaphors like onions on their sleeves and crocodile tears help portray the insincerity of those that have supposedly come ...

I love this the subtle hints at the corner of my vision hinting at darker things. It speaks so much with so little, which is often hard to come by ...

Into the broken moment when All things must be For now, or for not This is not the time And hardly the place Here we are Yet it seems and ...

The sands of forever Sift and slide into tomorrow There is nothing left for you here They mumble and sigh The struggle to abstain Leaves one wanting Needing something to ...