we'renotpeoplewe'reart

i thought it was good. i really like the feel of flight that you basically hand to me with those variously chosen words. great descriptive art you have and i ...

i thought it was good all together. good description. good plot. good theme. quite lovely.

Thanks for all of your ideas! It really means a lot to me and it helps me so much. God bless you too and you know he does.