we'renotpeoplewe'reart

i thought it was good. i really like the feel of flight that you basically hand to me with those variously chosen words. great descriptive art you have and i ...

i thought that it was very good. it was short sweet and to the point. i can really tell that u put the emotion into it because of the word ...

i thought it was good really good. great description and marvelous emotional revealing in the words. you really painted a picture inside of my mind of a beautiful young princess ...

i thought it was very good. the topic seemed well thought out. but i have a couple questions. when you say "leave me to my grief to my life" now ...

i thought it was good all together. good description. good plot. good theme. quite lovely.

that poem was wonderful. you truly hit the depth of what a true friend is supposed to do. it really explains what you should be looking for and what other ...

i thought it was very nice. I was intrigued almost the moment i started reading it. It had a good hook and a great first paragraph or so. You had ...

name:Untouched category:action fiction you said to post it so i hope i got it right

A dagger. Small and dull, but its size does not compare to the damage that can be done. Oh yes, this is the key to my past, present, and future. ...

Thanks for all of your ideas! It really means a lot to me and it helps me so much. God bless you too and you know he does.

you and me together... we'll be free forever... thought it was a fairytail but it aint so oh well but we cant be free... but we cant be free 'cause ...