waydownunder

Yay! I hate them Bratz dolls too! Kill em! turn em all off I say! Sorry got a bit carried away there. Nice story. Thanks for leaving a comment on ...

Nice work. The twist at the end was interesting by I probably might have a couple more hooks in the story just to keep the reader guessing and wanting more. ...

Great story. Good point about the 'suckers' though. I wasnt quite sure what the little girl was on about there for a while. But yeah awesome story. Check out my ...