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Re: What made you happy today?
After weeks of being officially depressed after a break up, I just nailed a exam for abnormal psychology. The irony sorta made me smile too.
Oct 2, 2005 -
Re: 'Wars never won' (Revised and now more readable!)
“You can never be a psychic if your such a defensive pessimist Charlie” Fuck that. All his life Charlie worked to disprove his mum’s psychic visions. Now, with every pessimistic ...
Oct 2, 2005 -
Re: Meadows in Bloom
I know everything’s not ok, As we’ve crawled through centuries, Watching innocence bathed in blood, But as you cry, your never gonna feel complete, So skip and stop when you ...
Oct 2, 2005 -
Re: 'Wars never won'
You can never be a psychic if your such a defensive pessimist Charlie” fuck that. All his life Charlie worked to disprove his mum’s psychic visions. So now, with every ...
Oct 2, 2005 -
Re: Jimmy Fights Butterpants
As Jimmy look around at his apothecary, he seemed at a loss of words. He wasn’t quite sure what to expect. Chantal’s face seemed distant, and some how Jimmy got ...
Sep 29, 2005 -
Re: Only Human
Yay! I hate them Bratz dolls too! Kill em! turn em all off I say! Sorry got a bit carried away there. Nice story. Thanks for leaving a comment on ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: A Prayer
As his eyes turned to the girl in the sand, he wished his soul would stop torturing him like this. Covered in sand, she seemed to be letting her spade ...
Sep 27, 2005 -
Re: Naked fires in empty fields
Naked fires in empty fields…there was just too much rage gone unheard… …microsleeps in every drag…and her heart was paying now for things she didn’t do.... turning away from goodbyes ...
Sep 26, 2005 -
Re: Law and order (short story )
And then there was the predicament of the missing cats and the hungry dogs. But something felt very repetitive about the whole thing. No patterns, just repetitive. As I forced ...
Sep 25, 2005 -
Re: The Room. Revised and better
Hey i really liked it! I didnt read all of it but seemed really interesting. You need to break it up into smaller posts, just so more people read it. ...
Sep 25, 2005 -
Re: Our Lord's Son
Nice work. The twist at the end was interesting by I probably might have a couple more hooks in the story just to keep the reader guessing and wanting more. ...
Sep 25, 2005 -
Re: Dramatic Fiction: Mandie's Testimony
Great story. Good point about the 'suckers' though. I wasnt quite sure what the little girl was on about there for a while. But yeah awesome story. Check out my ...
Sep 25, 2005 -
Re: The Phantom Pains (short story)
Drake pulled his lab coat to the side and bent down to make eye contact with her. He pulled his glasses off and began to clean them. "There’s nothing wrong ...
Sep 25, 2005
