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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Eternity

    First off, I love your Johnny Depp avatar. Ok, the poem: It flows nicely and it tells a good story, but watch your spelling. " realised" should be spelled "realized". ...

    Sep 25, 2005


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson